zach

This is wonderfully done...the piece in its entirety I read twice just so I didn't miss anything..but the idea of seperating a man from his thumb instead of a thumb from the man made me starting thinking...

j

Mark, you continue to amaze me with your writing prowess. Beautiful. Although very original it had hints of Bukowskian influence, hopefully you'll take that as a compliment =) keep up the amazing work. i swear one day i'll be telling my grandkids about the day i met Mark in a McDonald's lol. Awesome Write!

-j.

patti

A strong write, Mark, with a lot of energy and flow.
Really enjoyed this piece.
Peace~

woman-of-poems

remarkable tale in the
loss of blues...

those beautiful blues
you loved fighting.

k