my favorite parts
"begging that someone here
my eyes closed
in the darkness
feeling every beat
"my eyes opened
with the moment
and a long deep kiss"
very awesome. i had to grin at the "p r o c e s s i n g" it was great!! good work
So much for me waiting for a rainy day to read this, huh?! u had me eager to read every next word....very nice. very, very nice
wow, that was VERY nice mark,
i LOVED it!!!
reading your poetry makes me just forget about the world, and i find myself in a different place
the king of erotica||
That is so beautiful Mark. OMG that really touched me.
I'm totally awed by every word, i must say.. :)
I love this, Mark...from beginning to end. I love the darkness;
the secretive feeling it burns into my soul, the desire for physical
contact outweighs all else. Excellent write!
peace & hugs
i was riveted from beginning
the smoke, the heat, the
lust in the air;
the lonely lust for a stranger.
loved by k
outstanding piece mark, it kept my full attention the entire way through. i felt every emotion and saw every description. perfection.
what can i say you truly left my jaw droped to the floor and my mind wondering for more.very well placed mark very well placed
Wow, so beautiful and yet so outgoing. I love it!
This is solid, the opening drew me in and the middle maintained my interest. The format is different for a tale of such, however it keeps the reader moving through the piece without realizing how much they've read. I liked it. Nice work.