adam

"left
right
left
right"

heh. i loved it. why not do cool things with the words. hehe. why not.

amber

wow, this one is so amazing, i have to say it is definately one of my favorites,
your awesome

mark's wife
Bravemind, another great one,very expressive. I loved it.

bravemind


daryle
you are my friend
in real life
few people know me
as well as you


your comments - shit

daryle

If only I could write my music the way you write your poetry...
The sense of passion and touching expression is remarkable

amanda

Mark, I love this, so intimate.. all senses engaged...

'dripping secrets of your core
a lighted white tower
in the quiet of darkness
leering down at me
the night's last dream,

very well wrought..
A.Joy

zach

One of the best I've read in a while...loving, optimistic, and very cleverly composed.

patti

A beautiful, sweet, loving poem. Nice write :)

poets passion

you left my mouth watering for more,
i could feel the very passion that you was writting.