I admire your ability to open yourself up and let us look into your
soul. A true artist makes themselves 100% vulnerable....that is
what you are my friend...A true artist! You are amazing! I know
I've said this before....YOU INSPIRE ME!!


you do know deep.. this poem has alot of time in it, alot of life,
and alot of truth like a finger print. it paints a vivid picture. its
very good


fresh and real...


I really enjoyed your words


I didn't notice you had put up a new poem. 'Violent elegance' is
lovely. I agree with another comment, this does seem very
personal, with the immediete narrative quality and the appropriate
list of names.


I like this one because of how personal it is. Yet, I can still relate.
You painted a very interesting picture


I have read a number of poems on your site, there is some very good stuf there. The page is a bit hard for me to grasp, as were to comment what, so this is as an over all. Very good stuf. S


It was a very careful poem, the rythm was deliberate, led along, and in combination with the word choice, made the texture of the words themselves complex and rich. It's a sad poem, but not hopeless. I like it.


..there is no touch as felt
as reality
.
enjoyed!
k


this piece flows like water, straight from thought to paper.

great write


thee's no place like home....


loved ones are where you love